Worked on this for awhile, but this deep in the off-season, my McNabb is rusty, so this is as far as it got. . .
It should be enough, though to help us start getting in shape for the preseason, when, sans audio, we will need to have our own commentary running through our head should we be privileged enough to watch preseason.
[ ] = consider including, choosing one
( ) = choose one expression
________ (folksy adjective,etc.) = fill in the word of your choice that fits the description.
. . . . and we begin. . .
Mike Haynes: "What do you think, Peter?"
1. Pick one: (Yeah. Thanks ,Mike. Yes, Mike. Well, Mike, I’ll tell ya’)
2. [The other day ]
3. "I was (sittin’(in, around), hanging (out, around, out at, out in), (the locker room, the Pepsi Center, the studio, the Avalanche practice facility) and it (hit, struck, occurred to me) that. . . (these, this (guy(s), player(s), young man/men) are SO close to (turning that corner, taking that next step, really reaching that next level), that it is JUST an (HONOR, PRIVILEGE, TREAT) to be able sit here and watch it happen.
"you can JUST (pick one: feel, sense, see, get the feeling, start to sense, start to feel, start to see, begin to feel, begin to sense, begin to see)
how this (pick one: young, talented, emerging, up-and-coming) team is REALLY starting to (come together, jell, start to get a feel together, get a sense of, realize how really good they can be).